Tuesday, September 6, 2011

My Story

My story about my job at Papa Murphy's was lacking a continuous storyline. It was a good subject choice, but missed any sort of development with the characters. I hardly introduced my first boss, or the reason why he hated me. The story never got started, and consequently it did not end correctly. There were no smaller stories to connect or explain any of the events.
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  1. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2011 at 9:28 AM

    I agree. In the future, put enough in your posts so that any reader knows what you're talking about. For example, with this post, start with some information about your story -- what it was about, etc.

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  2. MattSeptember 6, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    Thanks

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